Wednesday, 17 March 2010
New Film Script! - Luke Greenslade
Laura:
Come on Charlotte, theres nobody here.
Charlotte:
Are you sure? you got that bottle handy just incase anyybody jumps out or owt?
(Laura grabs her bottle from in her pocket incase anyone jumps out on her and charlotte)
Laura:
yes its here.
Charlotte:
Just keep it with you its horrible in here.
Laura:
Just chill out it dont look like there is anyone here anyway.
(Laura and Charlotte continue their journey looking for kirsty, they enter through some old fire doors. Laura and Charlotte walk down an old stairwell looking around with a tourch, as they walk down the door shuts behind them making a weird noise)
Charlotte:
uuuurrrrrgggghhh whats that noise?
(The noise creeps Charlotte out, Laura reassures Charlotte it was just the door)
Laura:
sshhh its alright its just the door. i dont like it in here.
Charlotte:
where is she?
(They continue following the stairs allway down untill they find the room where kirsty was snatched)
Laura:
Just stay Close.
Charlotte:
Thats that room, where he had her on that chair over there
Tuesday, 16 March 2010
Research Into Location- Luke Greenslade


Lisa Clayton - film distributors
The partnership involved Paramount to distribute the DreamWorks animated films for a small fee, including the Sherk franchise and the sequel Sherk 2. The first film distributed under this deal is over the hedge
The deal closed on February 6, 2006. This acquisition was seen at the time as a stopgap measure as Brad Grey was unsuccessful in assembling sufficient films for production and distribution and the DreamWorks films would fill the gap.
On October 6, 2008, Paramount and DreamWorks announced the joint venture was ending and that DreamWorks would be seeking new distributors for its films.
Also, in 2007, Paramount sold another one of its "heritage" units, Famous, to Sony/ ATV Music production, ending a nearly-eight decade run as a division of Paramount, being the studio's music publishing arm since the period when the entire company went by the name "Famous Players."
PHE distributes most of the programming assets owned by Viacom parent National Amusements. The not only includes films by Paramount Pictures themselves, but also the back catalog of Dreamworks, shows from MTV Networks and Bet Network, and, through CBS home entertainment, the holdings of Viacom sister company CBS corporation - this includes the libraries of CBS television studios, CBS theartical theatre, and Showtime Entertainment.
PHE also has agreements with PHB for DVD/Blu-Ray distribution of various programs that the former aired, and several films and TV series based on franchises owned by the latter. By-products of the latter deal are the 2007 and 2009 films based on the Transformers toy line, and the 2009 film based on the G.I Joe toy line.
Films from republic pictures, Paramount's other subsidiary, are not distributed on video and DVD by PHE (with some exceptions), but are distributed on video and DVD by Lionsgate home entertainment, which recently signed a deal to distribute some of Paramount's own films on DVD (in addition to the aforementioned Republic library). Also, as a result of this deal, Lionsgate has recently released "triple features" of their own library of films on DVD using the package design originated by Paramount.
PHE have developed a well-known trademark by giving their Special Edition/Director's Cut editions different names rather than the usual "Special Edition," or "Director's Edition".
Internationally, PHE holds the DVD rights to several shows on HBO. PHE also distributes in Germany the DVD releases of films distributed theatrically by Prokino Filmverleih.
As Paramount Home Video, the company once distributed several Miramax releases on video - the video rights to some of these films are still owned by Paramount.
Recently, PHE launched a direct-to-video label, Paramount Famous Productions (with the "Famous" part of the name a throwback to the days when the company was called Famous Players).
This distributor released Alvin and the Chipmunks: The Very First Alvin Show on DVD
Tuesday, 9 March 2010
Title Sequence Luke Greenslade
Thursday, 4 March 2010
Shot List - Rebecca McBain and Lisa Clayton Luke Greenslade.
Shot 1 - Establishing shot - LS of Laura stood in corridor.
Pan right to establish the surrounding
Pan left to establish the surrounding
This also shows Laura looking around
Shot 2 - MS of laura pulling water bottle out of her pocket
Shot 3 - MCU of her shouting Charlotte
Shot 4 - CU of Charlottes hand on door handle. Match-on-action to show her going through door. Charlotte then walks through the door MS
Shot 5 - Shot-reverse-shot MS of Charlottes Speech, CU on Lauras reaction, CU on Charlottes response
Shot 6 - LS of Charotte walking over to Laura
Interior - Walking down another corridor - Dark
Shot 7 - MS of Lauras Speech
Shot 8 - Match-on-action. CU of Laura speaking then pointing. Shot of the area where Kirsty was grabbed.
Shot 9 - EXCU of Laura blinking. Shows flashback of Kirsty being grabbed.
Shot 10 - MCU of both girls together to show the distress on their faces.
Shot 11 - Shot - reverse - shot, Laura turning, MS to Charlotte, EXCU back to Laura to show fear in her eyes.
Shot 12 - MCU of Charloote talking to her distress, LS of both of them walking down the corridor finishing speech
Interior - Walking down corridor 2
Shot 13 - MCU of Charlotte in deep thought
Shot 14 - MS of Charlotte talking. LS of her walking, Cut to EXCU of trying door handles.
Interior - In function room
Shot 15 - LS of Charlotte moving around frantically.
Shot 16 - MS of both girls while Laura speaks.
Interior - Opposite staircase
Shot 17 - CU of Laura shaking her head. Zoom out to set scene near staircase.
Shot 18 - Goes to flashback when Kirsty is dragged away LS
Interior - Back room
Shot 19 - MCU of Charlotte talking to Laura.
Shot 20 - MS of both girls, Goes to another Flashback in LS of Kirsty in a chair screaming.
Shot 21 - LS of Laura and Charlotte stood from corner looking at her.
Tuesday, 2 March 2010
Full Treatment of the film Lisa Clayton
Duration: 50 minutes approx.
Programme (all film) suggested for a sequel. This will be in production after the film has been released, the realiablity on distributors will affect the production of the sequel.
Audience: The suitable age for the film will be 15 and over. It will be prefered be both genders, it will also appeal to an middle age audience due to the sub genre being thriller.
What has already happened: A young teenage girl had gone missing a few months ago at an old theatre studios where they used to have drama lessons, herself and friends had gone to investigate the location due to it looking mysterious. That was the last time the girls was seen. She was taken during the time the girls where walking up the staircase to look on the second floor, she was walking at the back when the three of them heard footsteps getting closer to them. With a blink of an eye she was taken, her two friends Charlotte and Laura where frantically shouting her name when they noticed one of the back rooms was open, there she was tied to a chair making no noise. The girls attempting to set her free when the killer jumps in front of them, they run back into the corner with their holding each others hands, shouting Kirsty's name.
Monday, 1 March 2010
Treatment for 2 minute film Lisa Clayton and Dale Hill
Duration: 2 minutes approx.
Programme (all film) suggested for a sequel. This will be in production after the film has been released has been released, the realiablity on distributors will affect the production of the sequel.
Audience: The suitable age for the film will be 15 and over. It will be prefered be both genders, it will also appeal to an middle age audience due to the sub genre being thriller.
What has already happened: A young teenage girl had gone missing a few months ago at an old theatre studios where they used to have drama lessons, herself and friends had gone to investigate the location due to it looking mysterious. That was the last time the girls was seen. She was taken during the time the girls where walking up the staircase to look on the second floor, she was walking at the back when the three of them heard footsteps getting closer to them. With a blink of an eye she was taken, her two friends Charlotte and Laura where frantically shouting her name when they noticed one of the back rooms was open, there she was tied to a chair making no noise. The girls attempting to set her free when the killer jumps in front of them, they run back into the corner with their holding each others hands, shouting Kirsty's name.
Friday, 26 February 2010
List of title sequence elements. Dale Hill
- Producer
- Distributor
- For example 'Universal Pictures'
- Main actors/actresses names
- Music by..
- Screenplay by..
- Edited by..
- Production design
- Directed by..
- Film Title.
- Dark close up shots to establish the scene without giving too much away.
- Spooky music
- Flashing lights.. (strobe)
The scene is a old snooker hall. Dark lighting. Could have strobe light to flash & light detail as texts & graphics roll over. Snooker balls could be picked out as detail, & some of the dark doorways.
White or grey text could be used, with possible flashes of red.
Title Sequence. Dale Hill
“When I did the effect for the title I used…a fish tank that was about four feet wide by two feet high. I put smoke in the fish tank and on the back of the tank I put the title that was drawn on an animation cel and behind that I had a piece of plastic garbage bag which I stretched over a frame and behind that I had a light pointing through the letters. When I photographed it, I put a flame from a match to the plastic. The plastic would open up and let the light through the letters. That is how the letters look like they form and burn on with the [light] rays. It was a simple process but we went through a lot of takes; one take only formed the letters “N.G.”
NOTE: On a film set, the mark of “N.G.” or “N.F.G.” is taped to any equipment that does not work. No good.
Thursday, 25 February 2010
Reviews of similar films - Rebecca McBain
Tuesday, 23 February 2010
Friday, 12 February 2010
Lisa Clayton - Film Script
(Laura is alone in the old projecting room. She looks round for people hiding in the darkness, she grabs her bottle of water from in her pocket in case of anyone jumping out on her, after Laura has discovered that no one appears to be about she shouts Charlotte.)
(The door opens slowly with Charlotte in her coat zipped up & her scarf wrapped tightly around her neck. She walks over to Laura & grabs her hand frantically. They keep looking around for somebody walking across the creaking floor boards.)
CHARLOTTE
Laura you got that bottle handy?
PAUSE:
CHARLOTTE
If somebody jumps us!
PAUSE: (She walks over to Laura & grabs hold of her hand)
LAURA
Just chill out, dunt look like anyone’s here though does it. Keep looking for Kirsty’s jacket. Am telling you she’s still in here
(Quietly)
LAURA
Look over there, thats where he grabbed her.
(Laura blinks. Flashback of when Kirsty was grabbed & taken away by the killer, the girls become distressed as this revisits their thoughts.)
PAUSE: (Laura turns to Charlotte & looks at her with fear in her eyes.)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
CHARLOTTE
Laura a cant deal wi’ it in here, its freaking me out. Too many memories of last time, a se it’s that room, where he had her tied to chair. Why dint he take either of us! Must have sumart about her. A think there’s more to this than we think ya’no.
PAUSE: (Looks of deep thought.)
CHARLOTTE
She must of been here before he snatched her because any killer would have taken us all so there wouldn’t be any way of him getting caught!
(Charlotte starts moving around frantically. She keeps looking over her shoulder after every step she makes as she walks with speed and frantic breathing behind Laura.)
PAUSE:
LAURA
To be honest a dunt know what to think anymore! A just wanna find this jacket & get out of here.
(Laura shakes her head as she keeps looking around the room waiting for the killer to appear.)
(The girls continue to walk with a progressive look over their shoulder. As they walk closer to the staircase, another flashback comes to them when Kirsty was getting dragged by her feet up the stairs. She falls into an unconscious state, due to her head been hit on the stairs as she is being dragged.)
CHARLOTTE
Laura am not even kidding did you hear that!
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
(Dramatic banging happens from the back room, the girls begin to scream. Another flashback comes to them, Kirsty was
screaming whilst being isolated at the back of the room unable to move due to the killer was looking deviously at her, Laura & Charlotte stood from the corner looking helplessly.)
Written By Lisa-Marie Clayton
Tuesday, 9 February 2010
Lisa Clayton - Sub genre (thriller)


Character profiles - Rebecca McBain
Actress: Rebecca McBain
Monday, 8 February 2010
Lisa Clayton- Genre of Horror films
http://www.filmsite.org/horrorfilms.html - looks into the detail of the history of horror films and gives examples of past horror films which were successfull.
Lisa Clayton - Classification & Target audience
The target audience we are aiming for would be 15 - 25 year old's as films of this genre are most popular with this age range and mostly with males although are film could appeal to older generations and to other sexes.
Lisa Clayton - Films of a similar genre
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5CvZGv8yNs - The Ring
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=obw488aLfaM - The Grudge
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0E75vi3ETc - The Hole
Lisa Clayton - Storyline
Thursday, 4 February 2010
Production Targets. Dale Hill
Research a film each/ Opening sequence of:
The Hole
The Grudge
The Ring.
Idea for the full film storyline
Characters & character profiles
Production company name
Research on certificates
Look into lighting & other effects
Post pictures of proposed location
Titles & how they will fit into the opening sequence


